Boshonto Family

aah..its kind of childish i know..but still..Priya wrote the first part of this poem..the first 2paragraph more precisely..a month ago she gave it to me..and i suck big time when it comes to love poems..tht is what took a month to complete this one..actually a month to gather enough strength to complete..yaah..i m tht bad..

at the end it comes out as below!
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We2 - the song.

A sun to embrace
Yet so far away from me
A rainbow to fetch
Disappeared before I could see

Waiting for the moon
To glow inside my heart
Waiting for the star
To sparkle all the dirt.

the embraced sun
the rainbow which we fetched
the moon..the stars..
all will sing a song today..silently..with us.

And when our song will be sung together,
The freedom of our lives will mingle as one
Your song is what brings us together,
And my song is what our lives will be forever.

We only have one song,
One song with two voices.

jotil.....kothin.....bt darunn...expression gulo chomotkar...2nd last paragraph ta bhalo legese...nice work u2....

Thanks bristir Din e ~

well..people didnt really like the second last one..they all keep themselves busy praising the last 2line..its abit catchy u see..

but i\'m glad u liked it..

bhaia....api kei purata ses korte diel bhalo hoto na???
apni kharap korsen boli nai....but ...bojha jai dui ta diff haater likha...
neways....both parts are good

api e amake bolse purata shesh korte..i thought it cud be great as well..thts why..umm..

thanks anyway..

yup..great work..but it has different tastes at diffrnt part......porle keno jani mone hoy duita vinno vinno sottar abeg...if one could complete the whole one tahole harmony ta aro beshi thakto..aro touchy hoto...

sotti kotha bolle i liked the 1st two para...tai bole bakita kharap eitao boltsina