01-29-2005, 10:43 PM
01-31-2005, 08:08 AM
bro kobita duto oshavabik bhalo lege gelo ..
kobita#1-a putul-er rupok hisebe bebohar ta sotti darun ar onnorokom.
Kobita#2 er ending ts just perfect.
belive me i loved them both.
maje sadhu ar cholito vasar misron ta deklam ... i guess apni icche korei kaj ta korechen(if i am wrong let me know).
waiting for ur next poem.
take care and keep on smilin
kobita#1-a putul-er rupok hisebe bebohar ta sotti darun ar onnorokom.
Kobita#2 er ending ts just perfect.
belive me i loved them both.
maje sadhu ar cholito vasar misron ta deklam ... i guess apni icche korei kaj ta korechen(if i am wrong let me know).
waiting for ur next poem.
take care and keep on smilin
01-31-2005, 12:04 PM
First one is fantastic..... just too cool
02-06-2005, 12:06 AM
WastedYears Wrote:
maje sadhu ar cholito vasar misron ta deklam ... i guess apni icche korei kaj ta korechen(if i am wrong let me know).
Shadhu aar Chalito bhashar mishron ghteche.......
karon..... kobitai Jibonanando-er kichu chotro halka-bhabe rupok hishabe babhohar kora hoyeche........
I hope u got that.......
02-10-2005, 04:06 PM
apni borabor e valo lekhen
abong amar ai kotha shikar korte didha nei apni akhaner oneker theke kobita valo bojhen abong lekhen..
abong ami aeo mone kori apnar kobita je kono jaegatei sapanor joggo\\
apni akta boi keno ber korsen na? ai khane jara lekhen tader majhe kamatro apnar e sei quality ase bole ami mone kori
abong amar ai kotha shikar korte didha nei apni akhaner oneker theke kobita valo bojhen abong lekhen..
abong ami aeo mone kori apnar kobita je kono jaegatei sapanor joggo\\
apni akta boi keno ber korsen na? ai khane jara lekhen tader majhe kamatro apnar e sei quality ase bole ami mone kori
02-12-2005, 02:19 AM
Brother!!!! What a nice poem!!!!
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