Boshonto Family

ami megh srishty korte parina,
brishtio na;
hai, nishchup garjanshil meghera-
chue jawa kannar
ki mugdhotar prodorshoni!
kannay skholito hoy dogdho upokul,
nissasher gandha shoda hoye jai.
asrur ja ek bindu kona
sporsho rakhe pathorer gaye,
pathor chire oshim shunnotay tar bash,
ajibon.
trisna mete na kokhono, mitbeo na,
shugondhi, shubhro kintu bikrito darshan megher pal,
bheshe berabe, bhenge porbe,
abar jonmabe.
thik manusher moto.
apodartho manush ami-
kotobar jonmai boloto?

darun upoma
valo likesen

hmmmmmmmmmm........
jotil hoise
bhallo

nice stuff. but you can even make it more and more better. the way u express 1st 2 line it was good. but after that? all r just messing up. try hard

best wishes

silence_speaks, darunnnn likesen....continue posting ~~~