Boshonto Family

Bolgahin shopno ek-pa-ek-pa
kore egote thake tomari dike;
oligoli periye choli---
kintu tomar barir agol kothai?

Krishnachurar deho nei
othocho ki archojya
obirol-  Lal guro chorate thake
amari pothe;
Shomosta batha buke dhore egote thaki
thoter boloy ghire nil hote hote
aro ghono nil hoye uthe;
Tabuo duusohoyo prohor kente jacche;
Chokhe porlo tomar hirer nakchabi
Kintu tomar mukh dekhte pacchi na keno?
Graho-shankul akasher niche tumi hariye jaccho!

Jodi tai hoi---
tobe amio amar ei ostitaw chire tukro tukro kore
chitiye debo ononto akashe.
                        -------- Aditya Rehman

Khub akta bhalo lageni..
apnar upomagulo.. kemon jeno..

jai hok..
nice try..











Buri

arektu rhymin thakle bodh hoi bhalo hoto..flow kete jacchilo barbaar..

best wishes.

kete ki jacche bhaia...???....
r ek bar pore bolen to...
cuz...
amio prothom bar pore kisu dhorte pari nai...
but ....
dui bar porar por onnek beshi bhalo lagse...

good one

last two line darun lagche , actually jodi ami jibon ta ke uri e dite partammmmmm!!!!!!

Nice present .

ami 2bar porsi
otota valo lage nai
tobe valoi
overall ar ki