Dhonyobaad
Ei toh jeebon jachchhe ketey
hashi aar gaaney
Dukkho ehshey chhobey kokhon
keu kee ta janey!
Aaamader nishshongtota
achhrey porey ekhanei
Dhonyobaad tai shobaike
thako tomra jekhanei...
bab bah.......................

well done,sobuj rastar pothik,monty

amder foortibaj monty saheb ki self expressions section take punur jibito korar jonnyo kobita likhechen....................great....................anyway, self expressions section take jaganor jonnyo amio ekta uddog niyechi (new thread) janina seta karo chokhe poreche kina.
monty,keep smiling and keep writing,bro............

shagotom monty. hmmm very nice!!
like it!
wud ne1 add something next these lines???
i mean its not incomplete as it makes sense but still......as i'm tuning it....it wud be very small wid only dis part. eitukute shur deya shesh. ontora er jonyo onek tune mathay ghurchhe but line likhte parchhina. amar ei prob ta eto beshi hoy!!

btw, dhonyobaad cute pie, dhonyobaad zhilmil
