Boshonto Family

[/font]Tomar akashe chhoriye dilam
Ek mutho nil rong….
Tumi dekhlena…
Tomar chokh chole gelo holud er dike,
Nil bujhi ar bhalo lagey na tomar?

Megh cheyechhile tumi..
Brishti hoye bhijiye dilam tomar akash,
Tumi sorey gele rod er dike ….
Brishti bujhi ar bhalo lagey na tomar?

Tumi jol cheyechhile
Ami nodi hoye bhasiye niye elam tomay !

Swapne tumi sobuj dekhechhile..
Ami phool_e phol_e bhoriye dilam tomar bagan
Ekhon bagan kete tumi ottalika banatei byasto

Hoyto sobujer proti moho nei aar...

Tomar eto tuku bhalo laga bujhtei
kete gelo kotota somoy !!!
Tobuo bojha holona kichhui...
Hoyto kete jabe aro koto
sohosro bochhor

Tobu, tomar jonno ami
Bar bar jonmo nite raji…..

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priyo bondhura ...... eta sudhui pagoler prolaap.......... tobu apnader motamot pele amar bhison bhalo lagbe........ ja ichhe likhun........ tobu to janbo amar lekha apnara porechhen

well..
i never read so organised "prolaap" b4...
i wud like ot call it a kobita..
anD i think its okay...
i wont say..
wow gr8... cuz its not..
but i guess u can to better...
cuz sm of the lines are really really gr8....
anD the starting was very good indeed.

yes. startin valo..
tumi atodin kothai chile...

kisu kisu jaega to osadharon hoyese
ektu control kore lekhle r ektu edit korle valo ekta kobita hobe

apnader sobai ke onek dhonnobad !!!... apnader motamot er jonno.... kobita ami likhte parina... tobu mon e ek odbhut aloron cholchhe... eta hoyto tar i bohiprokash.....  sobai bhalo thakun