08-15-2006, 09:26 PM
08-15-2006, 09:27 PM
bojha boro dai [part 1]
ami dekhini onek kichui...
dau dau kore jole otha gram
kingba ondhokare dube jawa jonohin gram
othoba...pure jawa gramer chai er stup...
shei stupe shawjan k khuje beranoo amar hoini...
ami shunini koto kichu...
nistobdho raate tha tha shobde beje otha sten gun
kingba jole otha chaler chchon porar shobdo,
putro hara shoddo bidhoba narir bilap
othoba dorojai boot er lathir shobdo...
shobhara manuser nirbak shunno dristy dekhbar moto chokh amar chilo na
adote tokhon amar kono chokh e chilo na...
ghor bari chere atonke paliye jawa hoini amar...
karon amar palanor proyojon chilo na...
tai bole ghore boshe khub shahosher shathe j shahoshider shahajjo korechi emon noi...
karon...amar j kono ghor chilo na...
nodi die bheshe jawa lash gunbar khela khelbar moto boyosh amar chilo na...
adote tokhon kono boyosh e chilo na amar...
koto kichu koto jone koreche... amar kichu kora hoi ni...
amar kichu dekha hoini... amar janar onek baki....
tokhon j amar jonmoi hoi ni.
ami dekhini onek kichui...
dau dau kore jole otha gram
kingba ondhokare dube jawa jonohin gram
othoba...pure jawa gramer chai er stup...
shei stupe shawjan k khuje beranoo amar hoini...
ami shunini koto kichu...
nistobdho raate tha tha shobde beje otha sten gun
kingba jole otha chaler chchon porar shobdo,
putro hara shoddo bidhoba narir bilap
othoba dorojai boot er lathir shobdo...
shobhara manuser nirbak shunno dristy dekhbar moto chokh amar chilo na
adote tokhon amar kono chokh e chilo na...
ghor bari chere atonke paliye jawa hoini amar...
karon amar palanor proyojon chilo na...
tai bole ghore boshe khub shahosher shathe j shahoshider shahajjo korechi emon noi...
karon...amar j kono ghor chilo na...
nodi die bheshe jawa lash gunbar khela khelbar moto boyosh amar chilo na...
adote tokhon kono boyosh e chilo na amar...
koto kichu koto jone koreche... amar kichu kora hoi ni...
amar kichu dekha hoini... amar janar onek baki....
tokhon j amar jonmoi hoi ni.
08-16-2006, 08:56 PM
oshadaron hoyeche!...bisesh kore prothom 3 ta para...sei din gulo jeno choker samne dheka jae...'Stengun er tha tha shobdo', 'narir bilap', 'dorojai boot er lathi' shobdogulo jotartoe se din gulite firiye niye jae...sesher tin line e abr jeno dhum kore bhortomane niye asha hoyeche...
maane amr mone hoyche ending ta hoetu r o bhalo hote parto...bhalo bolte ami shobdo coyon er kotha bolchilam...msg. ta thik e ache...koekta shobdo aage piche boshale hoetu r o bhalo hoto...
overall khub e darun ekta kobita...thnks...
ps: by the by eta ekantoe amr nijer mone kora...onno rao je emon ti mone korbe emon kotha nei...
maane amr mone hoyche ending ta hoetu r o bhalo hote parto...bhalo bolte ami shobdo coyon er kotha bolchilam...msg. ta thik e ache...koekta shobdo aage piche boshale hoetu r o bhalo hoto...
overall khub e darun ekta kobita...thnks...
ps: by the by eta ekantoe amr nijer mone kora...onno rao je emon ti mone korbe emon kotha nei...
08-16-2006, 09:11 PM
hmm... its a start... i cant write on 71 or bangladesh, thts misho bhai's dept...i jus give a try...anD this is one...
ses ta ki... kono kisui thik moto hoyeche bolei to amar mone hocche na...
she jak...
its for all...
so y dont u post sm of urs???
ses ta ki... kono kisui thik moto hoyeche bolei to amar mone hocche na...
she jak...
its for all...
so y dont u post sm of urs???
08-19-2006, 01:37 AM
eikhane naheen er ekta kothar ami tibro protibad janacchi
71 misho vai er dept hobe keno?
oita amader sabar subject..amader root
amra sabai amader nijeder abeg onuvuti eikhane tule dhorte pari..
tobe ekta kotha keu jodi 71 er against e kisu likte chae tar sathe amar kisu kotha ase..seita amar dept
71 misho vai er dept hobe keno?
oita amader sabar subject..amader root
amra sabai amader nijeder abeg onuvuti eikhane tule dhorte pari..
tobe ekta kotha keu jodi 71 er against e kisu likte chae tar sathe amar kisu kotha ase..seita amar dept
08-19-2006, 01:20 PM
nisargo Wrote:
eikhane naheen er ekta kothar ami tibro protibad janacchi
71 misho vai er dept hobe keno?
71 misho vai er dept hobe keno?
khikzz dosto...
ami misho bhai er dept bolsi ei orthe j 71 nie oR desh nie writing (incuding poem 2 article..all sorts) misho bhai khub bhalo likhen...
shei ta bujhaite mai misho bhai er dept bujhaisi...thts all...
r ei thread ta khular uddeshhoi hoilo amar moto jara novice... tara jate freely ei kahne share korte pare..thts all...
nisargo Wrote:
tobe ekta kotha keu jodi 71 er against e kisu likte chae tar sathe amar kisu kotha ase..seita amar dept
well tor eo kotha tibro portibad ami janacchi..
tor dept mane ki re????
oita borong amader shobar dept... jarai bolte chai...