Kobita jinish ta ami ekebarei bujhi na bollei chole..so kemon holo thik bolte parchi na.. gaan definitely bhalo laage and one can argue that a song is a poem with music.. in any case, jehetu tumi kobita competition er jonno likhcho na so oirokom judgement korchi na.. tomar creativity kaaje lagaccho etai main kotha.. well done and keep at it.. keu kobita lekhe, keu chobi aake aar keu chobi tole.. ami 3rd doler.. but shob kotai bhalo..
That was a complement incase you had doubts..lol..
pls ...........don\'t tell me it\'s a poem......................kobitar onek kichu tomar bujte baki ,jante baki...................ami tomake bolshina r likhona................likho...........tobe tar age jano..............
neel lohith Wrote:pls ...........don\'t tell me it\'s a poem......................kobitar onek kichu tomar bujte baki ,jante baki...................ami tomake bolshina r likhona................likho...........tobe tar age jano..............
thnx neel....i was jus waitin for sm1 to say this...
really....i mean it...
net a dc hoye boshe silam...kono kaj silo na...
thn boshe boshe com a type korlam...
uha jodi kobita hoi
to robindro nath sara jibon ghash katse...
lolz
Mr. Nil Lohit,
Would you like to let me know, what do u mean by a poem? At the best of my knowledge, Kichu sobdoke oboshoiye Bhashagoto truti o Bananer bhul na kore, sajei tolatai kobita. Sei kobita onek dhoroner hote pare, godayo kimba chara.... So, what could be else?
Goto bochor Shamsur Rahman ek sakhatkare bolechilen, Kobi ekjon Ishwar. Sutorang, Ishwar to nijey thik korben tini ki korben! Sob kobir-e alada alada style thake. Nahole, Rabindranather pore Sunil, Sakti, Bishnu, Subhash Mukhopadhyay kimba Joy Goswami ashto na.
---------Aditya Rehman
kobita ta porsi besh koekdin age..but eto boro kobita pore reply korar energy chilona..
shuru dike kobita r moto..majhe majhe ektu golpo golpo bhab...abaar shesher dike pure kobita..amar kache sheirokom e mone hoise..but theme ta oshadharon..loved that..shei shonge ending er haat e laal daag..
keep it up namheen apu..post more.
yea post more
are aivabei to hoe
aita jodi half kobitao hoe
next insllah tor hat theke akta pura kobita paia jaibo