Boshonto Family

bichhana theke norom shopnogulo
veshe veshe khola janala diye
shimuler tulo hoye, ure jai -
baire vorer veja batashe,
vashe-ure, ki vebe ektu daray,
abar neche neche poth haray.
shombit fire pele,
shojja chhere druto dorja khule
doure berui anginay -
jodi ektao dhorte pari
diner aloy - rater shopno
ei haater muthhoi.
shobar olokhe pichhu nite nite
bohudur chhute jai- nagal paina tobu,
aro uchute akasher neel shunne milay;
du\'ekti durbol - uthhte uthhte
kachhakachhi - hotat dhora pore
osthir kapa haater muthhoy,
dhora pore-i chhire-khule jai -
haate chhera shopno agle bari firi
aluthalu shunno bichhanay

ektu bhul chhilo update korlam

notun bochorer prothom kobita ...

apnar shopner pechone chutate jeye etto early-e ghum theke tule fellen...shimul tulor picho chutte jeye kotho ki dekhe ashlam... ...bhurer bheja batash e gran nilam...niil akash dekhe obak noyone shopner akash-jatra dekte bismito holam...abr chera shopno niye aluthalo bechana teo back korlam...

sottie onoboddo...oshadaron likechen...nijer sathe kaap kaowate parchi bidai r o beshi bhalo lagche...se sathe jagche bismoi nd srodaa...ettto shundar kore likhen ki bhave... ....opurboooo!!!

ajker Boshonto Rong-mohol apnar ...upobhug korun...

amader perfect composition er shonga shekhano hoechilo...smthing like this... u cannot add or subtract any thing without making it more worse.... shei shonga onishare eita k perfet kobita bolte icche korche amar...
jekhane jototuk dorkar...
and protita line shundor....
darun, ek kothai.

bhalo laglo sush. ar obhinondon notun bochchorer prothom kobitar kobi hishabe.

dhonnobaad bristir-dine,naheen,misho. apnader onek bhalo legechhe jene amar-o onek bhalo laglo. ami to kheyal-i korini ami e-bochhor prothom post korlam. thanks.