Upomagular use bhalo... lagse.
\"kintu ami-
amar kache ekhono shei purono guiter\" r
\"onekta jeno notun rong kora
purono bari.\" ....r good work.
But... Im lookin4 somthin difrnt... Shob ko\'ta kobitai kothao na kothao ek hoye jachhe... bole mone hochhe.. may b Im wrong. But r o kichhu Touchy... r narra deya lekha dorkar.
Abhie....have u read other poems of mine? for example, \"Ekti raater golpo\"... i dont think oita ar eita kingba onno kono kobita ek ba theame o ek. then there is another one named \"amar protivar shonga\". that one is totally a defination rather than any emotional kobita.
i am not saying j wat u said is wrong. u are entitled to post ur opinion and i respect that. but before concluding, i personally think we should take a second look. n e wayz thanks for ur complement and THANK YOU a lot for defining ur need and criticizing me in a very subbtle manner. i really thank u. constructive critisism is one thing we do lack......lets hope its a begining.
welll...ekjon writer er kisu nijosshota thake ja tar protita kobitai e common...
robindronath er kisu kobita porle to mone hoi nijei tinta likhe blend kore 4 no ta jonmo dise...whtever...
apner kobita gulor theme amar bhalo lage....
and ei chinta gulo ami kokhonoi xprees korte pari na...imotion over flow kore shob kemon khichuri hoe jai....
bhaia ki bhabe paren???
Unfortunately bhaiya, apni je kobitagular kotha bollen... tar ektao ami porsi bole mone porrenaa.... hoeto porsii..but she mone hoe koek Juug age... Amar khali Recent kobitagular theke comment korsi... Ete apni jodi emotionally Hurt Hoye Thaken(Mone hoe..1tu hoileo hoisen, taina bhaiya??..
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Hurting a poet wil b the last thing Abhie will do..!!
Im extremely sorry... but thts How i felt..
no swat bro...no offence taken or meant. plz jei kobita gulor kotha bolechchi pore dekho....boshonto tei ase....
ar naheen...
thanx apu...pari kina janina kintu cheshta kori.kobita likhi karon mukhey prokash korar khomota amar shimito....