Boshonto Family

shomalochok-der alochonay prithibi egoy
manush kichhu fele - kichhu rakhe, jibon egoy
jor kore je chai, jeet tar-i ---
ami shudhu-i dharon korte pari --
kichhu chaite parina - felte parina
dukkho-koshto-bedona, shukh-shopno shob -- shob --
joto kichhu valo, ja kichhu kharap
eke eke shob joma hote hote
pahar-porbot sringo gore othhe buke --
ami chapa pore thaki neeche
proyojonheen

osthir ekta lekha...

somalochock nirbak theke...proshongsa kore
sobtuku kobir pocket e jaak

nicely expressed...

proyojon na thakle pahar porbot er niche chapa pore thakar kuno maane acche ?..bhuk theke eshob namiye felon na!...

thanks pritim for your nice kabbomoy remarks

b_dine:
shomoshsha to okhanei amar...
shudhu je dharon korte pari
felte parina

good work

asole ai felar jonno kintu besh sahosh lage
oto sahosh sabar thake na
asole bshir vag e apnar moto
felte pare...dharon korei rakhe

pahar kokhono aka thakena,thake porbotmala.apnar abeg anuvutir sathe anno karo sukh dukhkho bedona mishe ase.tai
apni aboshshoi aproyojonio non.