Boshonto Family

ami ekta poem likhsi shobai kobi kobi vab nitese...ami na nile kemon dekhay . jai hok mathay ja garbage ashche tai likhsi...here it goes

fly, fly, hours fly
no reason for me to cry
people don\'t fly that high
no need for me to sigh
life fills up with so much hope
suddenly all the hopes elope
life finds itself meaningless
everything becomes a big whole mess
suddenly its all filled with light
don\'t know if its day or night
everything shatters all around me
the white light is gone, its a black dark sea
i start falling and i scream
reality fooled me tonight, it was just a dream

hmm... first poem?
i like the rhyming u used... though it was a bit confusing...

\"suddenly its all filled with light
don\'t know if its day or night
everything shatters all around me
the white light is gone, its a black dark sea\"

can u tell me wat does this mean?
otherwise... nice =)

\" jai hok mathay ja garbage ashche tai likhsi.\" i think that explains it...doesnt it?
well...if i really want to make a meaning out of it....u know...sometimes drastic changes happen in ur dream...so ...my dream was really really bright that i couldnt tell if its the sun or a spotlight on my face..then suddenly everything ...all the images around me starts shattering and my dream becomes a total dark screen....